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behoove_me · Nov 17, 2011 9:15 AM

I donno for some strange reason I cud not connect with the last part of the story, but before that I was simply luving the flow. May be it hasnt been that long that I have been away from home or may be I am too naive to understand the obvious. I have always luved your narration, they are too good.. I kinda visualize each and every scene with every word u jot in, this wasnt different. Loved your narration again and waiting for more. 

perfectionist · Nov 17, 2011 9:44 AM

Simply brilliant, well written - specially the first part. Two thumps up

serial · Nov 17, 2011 10:16 AM

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perfectionist · Nov 17, 2011 10:19 AM

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behoove_me · Nov 17, 2011 10:22 AM

Behoove me, I'm in love with both the topic you have chosen and how you have written it. Marvelous.

Rasika Kancchi · Nov 17, 2011 10:25 AM

अनि त्यस पछी ?? बाँकी भाग पनि लेखम है । राम्रो लेखाइ , बधाई ।

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behoove_me · Nov 17, 2011 12:38 PM

Absolutely loved the story. I agree wtih you. People sit in their comfortable homes in US and talk about being patriotic Nepalis. Big talk, no action. I don't call myself patriotic and I fall under those people who give out few dollars every year in the name of helping Nepal. I do it not because I am patriotic but because it makes me feel good about myself. That's all there is to the end of it.

halo · Nov 17, 2011 12:41 PM

Very well written. Please do continue :-)

HairyBicep · Nov 17, 2011 12:49 PM

- I liked this thread ( headline/topic) but hate to read the long content. I must blame it to my twitter a/c as I'm used to of it :) - I'd rather read the short snippet of the Nepal stay/visit only. - Anyways, I hope you enjoyed your trip and had memorable times. #HappyNepalVisit

no_more_crush · Nov 17, 2011 1:20 PM

Bro....maile ta sappai padhe ni ho...kasto dami lekhya yar.....ani btw ma ni ethiad batai gako thye.....ur story is simply awesome.....aaru ni padhna paiyos hai

Dukhe · Nov 17, 2011 3:11 PM

 I liked your wirting man...

IT_Guy · Nov 17, 2011 3:56 PM

 Hats off to you and for your story..................was awesome and intersting and please keep writing and posting it............Thanks a lot....

hamropyaronepal · Nov 17, 2011 4:36 PM

smooth man....continue.@Immigrants are not patriots, those pseudo politicians in New York, Boston and L.A are bunch of hypocrites, and so are the professors, engineers, doctors, all do-gooders in Midwest, panhandle, down south and all over who preach about their love for Nepal at the comfort of their living room.......@I was overwhelmed with emotion the moment I set my foot on the Nepalese soil. Memories flooded back, and so did emotions. For fifteen long years, there was nothing that I missed about this country, and now, all of a sudden, I found myself in tears, for some weird reason..............@So where was my home? Nepal? Or America? I was born in Nepal, but reconstructed my life in United States. Except for my family and few friends who couldn’t care enough, I had received nothing from Nepal. I had switched four jobs in two years, had relocated twice and was in complete despair thinking what might transpire in years to come. America was where I found my niche, I pay taxes, drive a good car, eat good, think, see and do good. So do the math, tell me where I belong. Man awesome....touched....

granite · Nov 17, 2011 9:38 PM

 Nice flow ...nice message...nice read..Kudos to behoove_me....Keep writing and hope we will see more of your creations in the future.

junkynfunky · Nov 17, 2011 10:21 PM

 nice read @behoove me...i was feeling u as if i was there, just right there boarding the flight, waiting, and on and on...loved it :) hope more follows

DHaRaNe-DADA · Nov 17, 2011 10:30 PM

Nice narration, well done. I think most of us share your sentiments to the extent of our own experiences. Not as an intention to take the focus away from your writing - some thoughts come to mind on the following given that there are many of us who, most likely, have similar dislikes: "However, I still struggle to understand how can we speak of justifying actions of nepalese leaders, speak of terminating the poverty, or build infrastructures in Nepal at ANA or during gatherings when are main focus is to eat, drink and be merry." This, admittedly, had been the norm for some of us for so long - however, we have begun to sway away from these organizations to tackle a few of the issues you mention quietly on our own individual merit. Maybe you can follow suit? An example of this is to get involved in the area where you have the greatest experiences and qualifications - and directly contribute in hopes of uplifting the entity, even just a few percentage points is enough, with a positive impact. These set-ups or partnerships work nicely when both you and the entity benefits, however.  Not to boast about it - but to just to give you an idea - I have recently agreed to volunteer to lecture at a local college in an area I have worked for years. I am also in touch with the stakeholders (mostly government officials and business sector players) to drastically improve foundational underpinnings in-par with the standard and regulations (seen mostly in developed countries) required for the industry to operate as a self-functioning entity. Whether it comes to fruition is another story - but having the chance to give back and work through the issues and processes is nonetheless a privilege, as opposed to an opportunity.

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behoove_me · Nov 18, 2011 10:16 AM

I must admit, when I first saw your long post yesterday I ignored it.  Today being Friday and not much to do at work I started reading your post with my morning coffee.  And dude it was awesome, love the way you write.  Thank you for taking time to write it and post it.  There are very few good posts like this one Sajha these days. 

Jonny · Nov 18, 2011 10:37 AM

I must admit, when I first saw your long post yesterday I ignored it.  Today being Friday and not much to do at work I started reading your post with my morning coffee.  And dude it was awesome, love the way you write.  Thank you for posting it.  There are very few good posts like this one on Sajha these days.  Last edited: 18-Nov-11 01:05 PM

Jonny · Nov 18, 2011 10:42 AM

स्वस्ती गरें, प्रभो। किस्न प्रभोले अर्जुनलाई हाम्ले पुनर्जन्म लेका लेकै हुन्छम, अन्तर तिमीलाई ती जन्महरुको याद छैन, मलाई छ भन्या थे अरे भन्ने ब्यापक हल्ला गर्थे महाभारत पढेका पन्नीत अनि बुझक्कडहरु। अचेल कली भृकुटीमण्डप तिर रमाईलो मेलामा चम्किने बत्ती जसरी झ्याप झ्याप भैरा बेला भएर हुँदो हो। कुरो उल्टो पर्या छ। प्रभोको पूर्ब जन्मको ज्ञान आफुलाई छ, आफ्नो बारे ज्ञान त सधैं अरुलाई नै धेरै हुने गरेको हो। त्यसैले हुँदो हो आफुलाई जति सज्जन भने पनि अरुहरुले ल ल भो--हाम्ले चिन्या छैन र भन्ने गरेका। जे होस, प्रभोलाई प्रभोको पूर्ब जन्म देखि स्वस्ती गरी ल्याकै हो, त्यो क्रम अहिले नी छोडीदैन। लेखकको बिचार सँग सहमत हुने नहुने एउटा कुरा हो तर प्रस्तुतीको कायल हुनु अर्कै। प्रभोको सोचाई अनि ती सोचाई शब्द बनेर बर्षिदा खडेरीको बेला परेको पानी सम्झिन्छु म। बेंसीको उकलो, थाकेको बेला, गर्मीको मौसम--प्रभोको प्रस्तुती अनि सरर चलेको बतास झैं। प्रभोको लेखाईको प्रसंसामा ओर्लिन जमजमाईरहेका शब्दहरुको घुईंचोले अहिले मलाई दशैमा नवमीको बिहान--त्यो पनि तलेजु सम्झाउँदै छन। यस्तै मिठा मिठा प्रस्तुतीहरु पढ्दै रहन पाईयोस।

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behoove_me · Nov 21, 2011 7:55 AM

 I had to stop reading your story after I was done with the first part and today I got chance to complete it. I really like the details you put there and the flow of story is perfect. Hopefully you will continue this.

Geology Tiger · Nov 24, 2011 10:35 AM

@behoove_me: Really liked the flow of your story. You have gathered important information and shared with us. U have a very good way of writing. Hope we can read other stories from you soon. GREAT.

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behoove_me · Nov 28, 2011 11:05 AM

@behoove_me :My conference call was abt to start when I first saw your thread.The writing was so great that I couldn't turn my eyes from it and pretended to be on the meeting for a while. Kudos. Please share more.

edipre · Nov 28, 2011 2:39 PM

AWESOMENESS. That's all.

aviatorchick · Nov 28, 2011 7:22 PM

 geez! where's the original story? 

riddle · Oct 12, 2012 10:18 PM

Riddle ji ..... I read this story/travellog in "http://www.masti     nepal      .com/thread76711.html" (tyo link ko space hataunus la sajha le rakhnai diyena space)   first ani balla yaha(sajha ko) thread dekhira ....tesmathi Beehove daai le sappai comment ra story metnu bhayecha yaha ta....... felt kinda sad... But an awesome read indeed..... kudos to the writer.... Last edited: 13-Oct-12 07:57 AM Last edited: 13-Oct-12 07:58 AM

ThahaChaena · Oct 13, 2012 7:56 AM

I remember reading this but looks like Behoove me deleted it. Is kastubh same guy as behoove me? Ki it's another case of stolen literature?

rethink · Oct 13, 2012 8:16 AM

Before speculations went beyond bounds, I felt it was necessary for me to reply to this thread. I deleted the post and the subsequent replies because I made a mistake of revealing a lot of details about myself in the story. When I mean a lot, I mean just that. It was an unexaggerated story which hovered around my family, my house, neighborhood, and close friends. I had written it with passion and had posted it in facebook and then posted it in sajha completely unaware that it could have repurcussions that would go against my favor. Long story short, I was stalked. That story gave someone enough fodder to google me, identify me in facebook and even find details about my family member. I felt dumb, very dumb, and I completely take the blame for not having enough forethought while posting such a story in sajha. I deleted the thread while I could, and I deleted all other stories while I still could. My apologies to all sajha visitors, wish I were a little prudent.

behoove_me · Oct 13, 2012 8:35 AM

 हेत्तेरिका पद्द्नै पैअना नि . चौटा खान आकी बुडी झोल मा डुबी जस्तै भयो . सबै जना को कमेन्ट मात्रै पो भ्यैयो त !!!:(

pokhrelikanchi · Oct 13, 2012 10:17 AM

 @behoove_me......I understand your need to safeguarding your privacy but I hope that you won't stop writing.  BTW...if you were the same person who posted same piece on [Disallowed String for - excessive promotion] then you may also remove it from there too. 

rahashya · Oct 13, 2012 10:27 AM

oh wow! That is one hell of a long story. Coffee khandai padhnu paryo.

riddle · Oct 13, 2012 11:11 AM

OKAY, I ALMOST FELL OFF MY CHAIR. I GOOGLED THIS STORY JUST NOW TO SEE IF THERE WAS A LINK SOMEWHERE AND INSTEAD OF SAJHA, GOOGLE DISPLAYED THIS OTHER WEBSITE CALLED MASTI NEPAL. i HAVE NO IDEA WHO POSTED IT THERE.  CONGRATULATIONS STALKER, YOU WON!

behoove_me · Oct 13, 2012 7:44 PM