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Posted on 05-17-08 9:58 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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त्यो कुनै नौलो शनिबार थिएन । आशा सधै जसो बिहानको नुहाई धुवाई सकेर चोक पुगिन् , पिपलमा पानी चढाउन । लामिछाने दिदी र शान्ता भाउजु पनि संगै पुगिसक्नु भएको थियो । आशा पिपलमा पानी चढाउँदै घुमिन् । शायद अन्तिम फन्को थियो होला, शान्ता भाउजुले प्याच्च भनिन्

‘ के हो आशा, तिमीलाई त बुढाले बहिनी ल्याईदिनुभएको छ रे! अब त हामी संग के हिड्थ्यौं होला!!’

आशा खंग्रङ्ग भईन् । एक कान दुई कान सुने पनि यस्तो प्रष्ट संग कसैले भनेको थिएन्, बुढाले कान्छी ल्याएको कुरा । अब नचाहेर पनि शंका गर्न बाध्य भईसकेकि थिइन् । शायद शंका भन्दा बढि, बिश्वाश गर्न बाध्य भईसकेकि थिइन्, मनले जति नै नचाहे पनि ।

हातको कलश कसो खसेन । बत्ति बाल्न पनि बिर्सिछन् । लामीछाने दिदी ले कुरो मिलाउने प्रयास गरिन्

‘अब बजारका कुरा सुनेर पनि हुन्छ र, के के सुनिन्छ के के नि छोरा मान्छे कुरा । घरमा ठिक भएर आए भईहाल्यो नि । कागले कान लग्यो भनेर किन चित्त दुखाउने?’

शान्ता भाउजुले अरु के के भनिन्, कुन बेला छुट्टिईन्, आशालाई केहि थाहा भएन् । मनमा सियो रोपिईसकेको थियो । उनि घर पुगेर ओछ्यानमा थ्याच्च बसिन् । उनलाई गाह्रो भयो । कस्तो कस्तो सास नै रोकिएको जस्तो । हिजो अस्ति सुनेको हल्ला आज उनको घर सम्म आईपुगेको थियो, लगभग सत्य भएर ।  उनलाई भुंईनै नभएको जस्तो भयो ।

बिहानको स्कूल; बाबु र नानी दुबै उठिसकेका थिए । जसो तसो टिफिन बनाएर स्कुल पठाईन् । बैशाखको महिना बिर्तामोडमा गर्मि नै थियो । घरको गारो(wall) उठाएको भएपनि छत ढलाई गरेको थिएन, जस्ता राखेको । कोठा तात्दै गयो । यता आशाको मन भने सिसो हुदै गयो । उनले बह पोख्न पनि सकिनन् , उनि बग्न पनि सकिनन्…………..


क्रमश:...........
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Posted on 06-24-08 11:30 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Absolutely Brilliant!!

 

You have portrayed Asha’s psychology more meticulously than she would have actually portrayed herself. Asha represents a large population of women who are highly under appreciated and are taken for granted by our society. Asha, living away from her husband, single-handedly manages her household, takes care of her children, and generates income for her family. Jeet Bahadur on the other hand, is enjoying an affair while isolating himself from his family responsibilities. Showing up at home in months and sending money once in a while, complete his so called ‘Male’ responsibilities. Despite knowing all these facts and feeling heart-broken throughout the majority of the story, as it unfolds at the end, Asha gets dissolved on her husband’s few generous words, and now, she is not only ready to forgive him but is also willing to make the biggest compromise for any wife - share her husband. What a heart!!


 



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