behoove_me:

I have always been a big fan of your ways of writing. The presentation is just superb.

“I shall give you 1200, now shut the F*%k up.” I hissed.

Towards the end, the story becomes so intense that made me remember my departure to the United states and i could feel my eyes going wet.

Of note, you are clearly the most talented writer in here. Please accept my appreciation. And do keep on writing!!!!

Love your narrations! Keep it coming!

 behoove_me, I am not happy. I thought you'd write about more incidents. Please write more; I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Dude kingsway to sukedhara in 2 dollars and 40 something cents, thikai ta ho ni .well written,you reminded me of nepal, I frequented that route and its the sorry state that taxi fare is never the same twice.

for some strange reason, I was hoping Sheila ki jawaani..  wud b played again on ur departure, but seems like the cab driver was smart enough to understand what you were going through. Like always, loved your narration and very details you mentioned. Plz do keep writing.

Great writing again.
Enjoyed each and every line which u have written till now.
Please keep writing.
 

What a pleasant read!

Go with the flow, couldn't stop the adventure of yours , mesmerized with yr captivating words, the reality of youngsters and mid life crisis people depicted in modern Nepal are so true, the family bonding, the friends reunion and Naatedar ko kuro, and the final alvida with promises, that's so so so similar for/about a guy or gal who have left Nepal and come to a different world and different culture in the modern setup. Hats off boss, worth reading yor travelventure after 15 years. I thought myself somewhere in your place dude.

 Behoove_me,

Great writing and simply fantastic. Read all the three parts and simply loved it. Keep writing bro.

Sparrow

As part of everyday existence we take in information and interpret it in the light of our unique life experiences........and BEHOOVE u r best  in it ........ ending left me when is da next episode comin ......  one sentence..... original and the best :)

Behoove Me you have a very natural style. Tastes authentic. Keep it coming.

We need more talented writers like you promoting Nepal like you have in this story. I highly recommend you send it for publication. This South Asian magazine has produced other Nepali writers work like yourself. It will be a great service for the nation.

http://www.nazarmagazine.com/?s=Nepal

The more Nepalese see writers like you published, the more you will inspire the next generation of writers.

definately its good writing keep it up coming . don't worry about paying high fare in taxy u are not the only one we all pay that much huge amount of money on taxy but its ok because it sucks to travel in bus travelling in bus specially in nepal yatayat standing sucks big time .