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 यो तिम्रो आँखा (Ashra)
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Posted on 12-10-06 8:20 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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अलिकति कबिता जस्तो पस्कदै छु यो आँखा देखेरे। तर म आफैलाइ चित्त बुझेको छैन। समय को अभाव ले edit गर्न पाइन। मैले जस्तो चाहेको थिए तेस्तो चाहि लेख्न सकिन। कुनै भुल भए माफ पाम।

यो तिम्रो आँखा

यो तिम्रो आँखा
केहि बोल्न खोजे जस्तो
केहि भन्न खोजे जस्तो
केहि सोध्न खोजे जस्तो
उत्तर नपाउदा छटपटाएर
मोति छर्न खोजे जस्तो

यो तिम्रो आँखा
अन्नत सपना बोके जस्तो
हर इच्छा रोके जस्तो
सबै आशा भेटे जस्तो
अनि अचानक तर्सिएर
सबै मेटे जस्तो

यो तिम्रो आँखा
जुनेलि लाइ मात दिए जस्तो
ताराहरु लाइ साथ दिए जस्तो
रात भरि जागेर
मिर्मिरे लाइ डाके जस्तो

यो तिम्रो आँखा
हार खाए जस्तो
जीत पाए जस्तो
आँशु लिए जस्तो
हासो दिए जस्तो
गाह्रो भयो मलाइ बुझन
यो तिम्रो आँखा

 
Posted on 12-10-06 9:31 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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वा वा वा । भाव हरुको कुनै अभाव छैन । शब्दहरुको चयन मा कुनै कमि छैन, सुन्दर सिर्जना भन्न मलाई कुनै कन्जुस्याईं छैन ।
 
Posted on 12-10-06 9:33 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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राईटरजी, आँखाले मोहनि लायो जस्तो छ तपाईँलाई :)
राम्रो!
 
Posted on 12-11-06 5:33 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Kabita chai ramro cha saathi ko....tara maile chai ankha ma kei dekhina....sayad tyasto deeply herna sakne chemata chaina ma ma.......:D.......
 
Posted on 12-11-06 5:48 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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perfect peom for these eyes !

 
Posted on 12-11-06 7:14 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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i think the poem is for this eyes.

 
Posted on 12-11-06 2:45 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Thank you rahul dai....All people are saying you rahul dai so i m calling it to you too.....i m very influnced by your poems posted on varous threads.

Birkhe_maila jyu,

U may righ (50%) and wrong(50%)....Aaankha le mohini nai lagaye ko ta hoina..tara man ma choeko bhane ko chai pakkai ho...

tshetensherpa jyu,,

dhanyabad tapai ko amulya comments ko lagi......

u aankha chai ashra ko ho she didn't post wrong eye on her thread.
 
Posted on 12-11-06 6:56 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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i wrote this for ashra eye's. honestly...i wrote it for her....no offnese plz...this thread is closed now....
 
Posted on 12-11-06 7:02 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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aaayo aarko aashique pheri.....sajha ma dui jana ko break up bhayerr katro bhai sakyo...euta le aarko ko lagi sajha nai chodna tayar cha...as_a_writer chai naya suruwat garne bho...go man go ...grab it...wish u all the best.........
 


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