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 हाम्रो सम्बन्ध र शहरी चर्चा
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Posted on 01-04-11 1:15 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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धेरै समयमा केही कोरौ भनेर एस्सो : 







 तिमी अढिग भएर हैन 
म गलेको 

तिमी आगो भएर हैन 

म जलेको  

 

यो त पस्चतापको मर्म हो 

मैले लिएर आएको कर्म हो 

हराउने छ मेरो अन्तिम सास सँगै 

खरानी भएर जानेछ मेरो लास सँगै 

 

उदेक लाग्छ, एक छिनको प्रतिक्षापनी 

बरसौ भएछ सोच्न छाडेको पनि 

अब त जिन्दगीलाई एसै धकेल्दैछु 

नपिएको बिष हरु ओकल्दै छु 

 

तिमी सरल भएर हैन 

म तरल भएको 

तिमी पानी भएर हैन 

म अबिरल बगेको 

 

यो त प्रकृतिकै देन हो 

मेरो सुखको त्यो एक छ्ण हो 

हिजो थिएन, भोली रहन्न 

जती कोशीस गर तिमी, भुलाउन म चाहन्न 

 

हिउँ पग्लिनु र रात कटाउनु   

निमेश भरकै कुरा त हो 

हाम्रो सम्बन्ध र शहरी चर्चा 

बेतुक को बात न हो 

 
Posted on 01-04-11 1:24 PM     [Snapshot: 14]     Reply [Subscribe]
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वाह ! नाराने वाह !



देर आया दुरुस्त आया भन्थ्यो  इलाहाबादमा, त्यो भन्दा नि दुरुस्त तन्दरुस्त कबिता आयो।


तिमी सरल भएर हैन

म तरल भएको

तिमी पानी भएर हैन

म अबिरल बगेको


यो चाँही चोरुं चोरुं लाग्यो है ।


 
Posted on 01-04-11 2:39 PM     [Snapshot: 71]     Reply [Subscribe]
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नाराने ब्रो,

सुन्दर कविता, शब्द चयन गज्जब्को छ।
 
Posted on 01-04-11 2:54 PM     [Snapshot: 82]     Reply [Subscribe]
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ल ल गुरु राम्रो छ, प्रयास जारी रहोस्,


अनि यस्तै हो काग कराउँदै गर्छ पिना सुक्दै गर्छ;


 
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Posted on 01-04-11 4:23 PM     [Snapshot: 142]     Reply [Subscribe]
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अरु चै बुजेको जस्तो लाग्यो मलाई,यो लाइन चै बुजिएन, नारनेजी यो लाइनको अर्थ बुजाइदिनु हुन्छ कि ?



तिमी सरल भएर हैन



म तरल भएको



तिमी पानी भएर हैन



म अबिरल बगेको


 

 
Posted on 01-05-11 7:31 AM     [Snapshot: 321]     Reply [Subscribe]
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wa..wa..wa narayan jaos aaroo pani jaos?
 
Posted on 01-05-11 11:15 AM     [Snapshot: 374]     Reply [Subscribe]
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I am not liquid
because you are simple
I am not flowing non-stop
because you are water

English ma lekdha ta jhur sunne rahechha.
 
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 Thank you everyone...

War Damn Eagle!!!

 
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 uttam...atiuttam..ramailo lagyo Narayan..feri pani jaos arko!!!!
 
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तिमी सरल भएर हैन
म तरल भएको

तिमी पानी भएर हैन
म अबिरल बगेको

English translation,

It was not your simplicity
that tested my flexibility

Nor was it your flowability
which tested my eternity

 


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