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 जीवन लाई अभिनय नबनाउ साथी
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Posted on 08-03-10 8:55 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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जीवन लाई अभिनय नबनाउ साथी  

नाटक लाई जीवन सँग तुलना नगर साथी
त्यो त केबल अभिनय मात्र हो 
वास्तविकता नाटक भन्दा भिन्न हुन्छ 
नाटककारको यात्रा त नाटक भित्र मात्र सिमित हुन्छ 
जीवन को यात्रा पनि लक्ष्य पनि असिमित हुन्छ 
जब पर्दा खस्छ अनि वास्तविक जीवन सुरु हुन्छ
नाटक त केबल मरोरन्जन मात्र हो
नाटक को रँगमन्च मा भर्पुर ताली भेटिन्छ 
जीवन को मन्च मा ताली सँगसंगै गाली पनि भेटिन्छ
अभिनय त प्रदर्सन मात्र हो क्षणिक हुन्छ    
जीवन एक प्रक्रिय हो पद्दती हो निरन्तर् चलि रहन्छ    
त्येसैले अभिनय र जीवनमा समान्ता न खोज साथी 

जीवन लाई अभिनय नबनाउ साथी
जीवन लाई अभिनय नबनाउ साथी    

 
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ke cha rajaji,

kina yesto tiktata.

 
Posted on 08-04-10 11:19 AM     [Snapshot: 209]     Reply [Subscribe]
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Ramro Sirjana!
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Posted on 08-04-10 7:05 PM     [Snapshot: 307]     Reply [Subscribe]
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मिस्टेकले Down sign दिएछु । सच्चयाउन मिलेन । माफि चहान्छु ।

"जीवन एउटा अभिनय"


            मलाई कोई-कोईको जिन्दगिमा हिरो हुन मन लाग्छ
            मलाई कोई-कोईको जिन्दगिमा भिलेन हुन मन लाग्छ
            बास्तवमा बास्तविकता यत्ति गार्हो छ मलाई
            मलाई मकुण्डो लागाएर तरुनि फकाउन मन लाग्छ ॥

   
 
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The above poem was written to berate the greatest literary hero of all time: William Shakespeare. Shakespeare said, "All the world's a stage, and all the men and women merely players: they have their exits and their entrances; and one man in his time plays many parts, his acts being seven ages."


The poet has deliberately targeted and defamed the name of Mr. Shakespeare, whilst we have found many inaccuracies in his poem. The poet states that only applause are found in the stage (नाटक को रँगमन्च मा भर्पुर ताली भेटिन्छ, जीवन को मन्च मा ताली सँगसंगै गाली पनि भेटिन्छ) but the fact is that a stage act receives both adulation and opposition (booos). There are several other inaccuracies listed in the poem which are obvious. The only way this poem can be cited as a legitimate piece is if Jeevan and Abhinaya have last names.


All in jest, kaam napayera.


 
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Thanks everyone

@kiddo I am not trying to defame William Shakespeare, but I have rights to disagree and thanks for the comments next time I will be very careful  choosing my words. By the way I wrote this poem when I was 18. I was going through my old stuffs I found some of my old poems I liked this one and posted there 
so enjoy
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AmitRaja
    Hi!

Sorry for that down sign. That was a pure human error, and to correct it, I've given another UP sign.


आई लाईक ईट ।
Last edited: 09-Aug-10 06:55 AM

 
Posted on 08-09-10 5:36 AM     [Snapshot: 550]     Reply [Subscribe]
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LOL Keta,


Mav ko rajaji, u r lucky to gt this analysis hai. ENX 3009 research paper ko soure lajja j sukai hos


 
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amitraja le mero last line chai padhena chha.


 


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