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Posted on 08-11-09 1:03 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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  WHEN THE WEIGHT OF THE WORLD IS ON YOUR MIND


when the weight of the world is on your mind


and you feel that you can't take it no more


yell at the sky yell at the sky and if you do it right


you will be as big as the sky and feel as light as a cloud


if you are feeling fine then laugh from your gut 


your laugh will turn into flower .so feed  your heart with flowers.


so women who are flower will open up to you. will open up to you


and when your heart is broken and you are in pain 


dont cry my friend and dont you complain 


just gather inside the tears that your waery soul will deliver


and if you do it right  you will be as mighty as a flower river........



 
Posted on 08-11-09 1:09 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Posted on 08-11-09 1:23 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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WRITE YOUR POEM TOO I WANNA FEEL IT READ IT THE WORD THAT COME FROM YOUR HEART
 
Posted on 08-12-09 1:53 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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ROAD

in our hand there is a map leading ot tomorrow
even it ..it take a little longer to get there
we cant lose sight of our destination
oh yes we were led astray by the wind that blowing.....
the sun is rising to shine on out path again
it we walk on without giving up and without hurry
eventually a beautiful flower will bloom
 
Posted on 08-12-09 12:56 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Nice poem metal girl!! very touching. I wish I could write poems instead of plagiarising. Like this one:

Roses are red,
Violets are blue,
Most poems rhyme,
This one doesn't.

:)

 
Posted on 08-14-09 9:05 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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You will ever


never conquer a mountain


Will you stand


on the summit


a few moment so,


then the wind


will blows your


 foot-prints away....


 


ABODE SHIVA..



 
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N_val G,


Nice one. I remember one song out of your poem.


"Give me miles and miles of mountains and I'll still ask for the sea"


-daum


 
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metalgal

All you need
the charming eyes
the bold tone
and strong hands
lead you through
fascinate all the way
fun and frivolous
a trustworthy company.. .. ..

and
you will see the colors
feel the sun warm
and see
stars shine on you
moon to smile
and the thunders sparkle
at your magic

you will see the day
open heart and wide smiles
sun shining on you
the warmth quenching your heart

wait my dear, you will
you will
its for sure life comes lively again...

 
Posted on 08-19-09 2:35 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Lovers, forget your love,
And list to the love of these,
She a window flower,
And he a winter breeze.

When the frosty window veil
Was melted down at noon,
And the caged yellow bird
Hung over her in tune,

He marked her through the pane,
He could not help but mark,
And only passed her by
To come again at dark.

He was a winter wind,
Concerned with ice and snow,
Dead weeds and unmated birds,
And little of love could know.

But he sighed upon the sill, 
He gave the sash a shake,
As witness all within
Who lay that night awake.

Perchance he half prevailed
To win her for the flight
From the firelit looking-glass
And warm stove-window light.

But the flower leaned aside
And thought of naught to say,
And morning found the breeze
A hundred miles away.

 
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“Love never dies a natural death. It dies because we don't know how to replenish its source.
 
Posted on 08-19-09 2:40 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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life sick of it all,sick of my life 
     watching moon pass me by 
             i sit and wonder .am i here for any good 
if only.if only i could fly 
      away from this place i would go if could 
           watching the sun pass me by 
am i really living how i want ? 
      if only ,if only i could fly 
away from my sin,my soul i would flaunt 
        watching the stars pass me by 
do they really care at all? 
           if only,if only i could fly 
away from the things that make me fall 
      watching the world pass me by 
                  is anybody listening to me? 
if only,if only i could fly 
              above and beyond .just to flee 
flying so fast not slow 
      seeing what is high and what is below 
             so gently with the wind i flow 
sick os it all sick of my life 
         sick of the pain sick of strife 

 
Posted on 08-19-09 3:22 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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एक्लो, एक्लो म
यो मध्यरात सन्नटामा
एक्लो म
म छु अनी मेरो एक्लोपना
म छु अनी मेरो एकान्तता
ति आकाश तारा हेर्दा सुन्दर छन'
तर ति सबै एक्लै एक्लै,
आफ्नो अन्त्यको प्रतिक्षामा छन 
आखिर सब चिज क्ष्अय छन
सिवाय यो मेरो एक्लोपना,
छैनन साथी म भन्दिन
बस्दीन समाजमा म भन्दिन
छैनन प्रेमिकाहरु म भन्दिन,
तर पनि त्यो भिडमा म एक्लो छु
सिर्फ म एक्लो छु
मेरो छाया, मेरै बैरी भएको बेला
मेरो सपना आकाश सरी भएको छ
क्षितिज पारी गएर यो
एक्लोपना बिसाउन खोजेता पनि
यो मलाई अझै रित्तो बनाउदै
मेरो मुटु अनी कलेजो,
भुट्दै मिठो मानेर यो
एकान्तता मेरो बिजोग चाखिरहेछ 


 


 



 


 


नेपाली परियो, नेपालीमै कबिता कोरियो
केही व्याकरणमा गल्ती भय माफि चाहन्छु


 
Posted on 08-19-09 8:44 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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सिमाना

आवश्यकता, अभाव अनी
अराजकताले सिचिंएको मेरो देश

राजनेताहरुका पाँउमुनी
गुट्मुटेर थिचिएको मेरो देश

चार वर्ण छत्तिस जातको
हुलमा मिचिएको मेरो देश

छिमेकी मुलुकको कलमले
सिमाना खिचिंएको मेरो देश

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न रुखले दियो सुख
न त सुर्यले न्यानो ताप
हलोले नि जोत्न सकेन
सतिले त देको रे श्राप
हसियाँले नि रेट्नु रेट्यो
पुनर्जन्मको थियो कि पाप

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हिमाल पग्लिएर पहाड
पहाड भाँसिएर तराई

तराई पछी खै कता हराई
यसरी हराउँदै खुम्चिएको मेरो देश ।।


 


-daum


 
Posted on 08-19-09 10:07 AM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Sap poem ramro cha. Keep it up.

 
Posted on 08-19-09 9:22 PM     Reply [Subscribe]
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Everything in this world
All that I'll ever need
Is in your eyes
Shining at me

When you smile I can feel
All my passion unfolding
Your hand brushes mine
And a thousand sensations
Seduce me

'cause I
I do cherish you
For the rest of my life
You don't have to think twice
I will love you still
From the depths of my soul
It's beyond my control
I've waited so long to say this to you
If you're asking do I love you this much
I do

In my world, before you
i lived outside my emotions
Didn't know where I was going
'Til that day I found you
How you opened my life
To a new paradise
In a world torn by change
Still with all of my heart
'Til my dying day


 


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